Nazneen Akbari

Critiques

Critique

Are you looking for a constructive analysis of your picture book manuscript? Are you burning out paying $$$ for critiques?
Well, I have good news for you.

My critiques don’t just say, “it doesn’t work,” I dig deeper and explain why “it doesn’t work”. Additionally, I give you tons of ideas and suggestions for you to walk away feeling inspired and confident.

And my pricing? See that pocket-friendly tag for yourself 🙂

I critique non-rhyming, fiction picture books and biographies.

Full Picture Book Manuscript
$49
Phone Consultation
Starts at $29
So much can happen when you brainstorm and bounce ideas. This call is your chance to dig deeper into the critique, clarify those nagging doubts, and learn more about story writing.
Bundle Offer
3 critiques for $132
Cathy Sheafor PB Writer

Nazneen is a gifted PB critiquer. She provides valuable feedback on big picture issues from structure to theme to character development and simultaneously provides copious line-level comments. Her attention to detail is impressive and appreciated. I highly recommend her services.

Gwen Owens PB Writer

Nazneen is thorough and professional. She helped me with a number of things including character development, story arc structure and mentor book titles.

Suzanne Elson PB Writer

I love all of Nazneen's comments as usual!