Are you looking for a constructive analysis of your picture book manuscript? Are you burning out paying $$$ for critiques? 

Well, I have good news for you.

My critiques don’t just say, “it doesn’t work,” I dig deeper and explain why “it doesn’t work”. Additionally, I give you tons of ideas and suggestions for you to walk away feeling inspired and confident.

And my pricing? See that pocket-friendly tag for yourself 🙂 

I critique non-rhyming, fiction picture books and biographies.

Full Picture Book Manuscript


  • Big Picture feedback
  • Line-by-line edits
  • Analysis of all aspects of PB writing: voice, story arc, character development, language, opening and ending
  • Mentor text recommendations
  • Marketplace viability assessment
  • “What next?” suggestions

Phone Consultation

Starts at $17

So much can happen when you brainstorm and bounce ideas. This call is your chance to dig deeper into the critique, clarify those nagging doubts, and learn more about story writing.

30 minutes: $17

45 minutes: $ 21

60 minutes: $ 24

+$4 for additional 15 minutes

Bundle Offer

3 critiques for $98

Save $10
Priced reduced from $108 to $98
Purchase three critiques together and save those extra bucks. 
  • Rush critique is free.
  • No charges for extra word count
Quick Turnaround
  • Get your critique in 3 – 4 days

Refer a friend & get 50% off

  • Your next critique is for $17!
  • Your friend has to purchase a critique

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Nazneen is a gifted PB critiquer. She provides valuable feedback on big picture issues from structure to theme to character development and simultaneously provides copious line-level comments. Her attention to detail is impressive and appreciated. I highly recommend her services.
Cathy Sheafor, PB Writer
Nazneen is thorough and professional. She helped me with a number of things including character development, story arc structure and mentor book titles.
Gwen Owens, PB Writer
I love all of Nazneen's comments as usual!
Suzanne Elson, PB Writer
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